for Kyle
the
three-string
cigar box guitar that
moans
the way I used to
the
James Dean hair
and the
voice
the
color of blue
eyes
the
girls
basking bare
shoulders
in his
shades
that reflect
the everything the
nothing
of the crowd
the
calloused finger-
tips that
press
my tongue
into the
fret
of my
throat and
weave
the
wood
and
nickel
and
flesh
into a sound I
wrap around
my treble
shoulders
and
wear
into my blue
blue
night
Cool box!
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Cool piece! Love the feel of your words strumming forth memories.
ReplyDeleteAnything to do with a guitar will catch my eye, but oh my, this is so good!
ReplyDeletethanks ladies. live music and craftsmen-musicians are the best muses...
ReplyDeleteSometimes three strings is all two need.
ReplyDeletethanks, Canis...your comment is a poem itself x
ReplyDeletecalloused finger-
ReplyDeletetips that
press
my tongue
into the
fret
of my
throat
LOVE that line. gorgeous piece.
:0)
Exquisite poetry.
ReplyDeleteA wreath of smoke trails me as I leave this poem, this bar, ears ringing in the quiet night air...lovely. You did, however, throw me at first because I didn't know about 3-string cigar box guitars. I pictured something that a kid had made, with rubber bands for strings. Who knew?
ReplyDeleteKaren, Carrie...thanks for stopping in and sharing. David, if you want to hear that 3-string moan, just click on the "Kyle" link at the top. Cool stuff.
ReplyDeleteWonderful rhythm and flow to this poem. It reads so well and the words contained within it are beautifully deployed.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem.