blunt force wind
a jigsaw poem
falls
I slice
the day into
bite-sized
pieces
you find
in molded baggies
under the bed and
in the drawer
next to expired
coupon smiles
I stand
in line to dine
behind the altar
bakers bake
snippets of
New Roman flesh
to type
on the ribbon
of my tongue
I smoke
on matchbook looks
hand-dipped
behind the counter
by the guy
with the long
slow eyes
(strike
anywhere)
I park
my repo'd joy
in the garage
hand over
the keys
drop my
penance
in the meter
stay tuned
for six o'clock sound bytes
of me
a memoir montage
'cause
no one
reads her
cover to cover
at the end
of the day
once upon a time
they'll say
and my
how her knees
have grown old
I hear she slept
with one hip open
how
bold
A tantalizing look into a fascinating life.
ReplyDeleteEnraptured.
ReplyDeleteIf anyone out there still is unckear about what good poetry is, they can start here. Terrific imagery, reaches right down into your gut and won't let go. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteDiana, Josh, and Robert...thank you each for taking time with the poem and for offering your beautiful comments.
ReplyDeleteIndeed a fascinating poem. True playfulness and inventiveness in your language.
ReplyDeleteExquisite. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletePoetry doesn't get much better than this...*bold* is indeed the word. // Peter.
ReplyDeleteDefiant and sad. Broken apart perfectly and equally by the pace and tone. Good stuff, Angie...thanks for posting. Rasmithii
ReplyDeleteA great poem, fluid and exploratory, honing the fantasy and the insight of the reader. A "flashlight" poem, gazing into the darkness and transmitting strong impressionistic imprints and feedback. Self-sufficient and unafraid.
ReplyDelete"New Roman flesh
ReplyDeleteto type
on the ribbon
of my tongue"
My favourite part. Nicely done!
A great play of words~
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